Thursday, September 30, 2010

One Last Chance

Grey was the world that survived
Through a pair of colored glasses,
With wrinkled thoughts, bland emotions,
With numbness in a world of chaos.

The victory of a tired mind
Against a broken heart,
The victory deprived of a comrade;
Oh! A victory so futile!

Groping hands in the darkness
Startled by a soothing touch;
The healing touch of life it was,
The touch that cured a wounded soul!

The answer to a thousand questions,
The truth beyond all lies,
The calmness amidst a storm,
The faith in spite of letting go.

While broken pieces join
With the strength of hope renewed,
Footsteps bold with every second,
As love shines in noble hearts.

One last beckon to childlike innocence,
One last visit to the land of dreams,
One last belief in unsaid words,
One last chance of life before death.

6 comments:

  1. I am 'not so very good' with poetry! But I love the optimism in it. You have always been so good with words.

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  2. The beauty of your writing is the truth behind it.. not only u write innocent things you do follow them with your heart.. I like this poem coz its beautiful words.. very simple yet very intuitive.. very good work.. keep it up..

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  3. Innocence is the themes nowadays. Good Work as always. Entire poem is great, but I think last line could've been better.

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  4. So beautifully written..I second Nandi on the simple and intuitive one..The journey of emotions from one state to another is described in a suave n elegant way..U have an amazing gift of writing poems..keep writing frequently.. Great wrk :).Waiting for the next ;)

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  5. likes...don ve much to comment...poetry is the thing i hated in English!! :P

    But unlike Anshul I like the past para the most!

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